Monday, December 05, 2005

[haiku]

the patter of rain
lulling heavy eyes to sleep
rhythmic dancing drops


2 comments:

  1. i remember listening to the rain and wondering if it's playing several familiar tunes at the same tune. your simple tanka reminded me of my love for rain.

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  2. This piece has a nice rhythm. Like the rain you describe.

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be brave!