Monday, April 03, 2006

[haiku]

our lives, like lightning
bright, boundless, full of sound
and oh, so brief!

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4 comments:

  1. DanielleMon Apr 03, 11:17:00 PM

    You can't keep a good haiku down. Gorgeous.

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  2. bigshouldersTue Apr 04, 12:36:00 AM

    thanks, Danielle.

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  3. BillThu Apr 06, 12:52:00 PM

    Alliteration and assonance controlled and expressive.

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  4. bigshouldersThu Apr 06, 02:47:00 PM

    Thank You, Bill. I wish I were more prolific, but I'll take what comes to me.

    b.s.

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be brave!