Monday, December 05, 2005

[haiku]

the patter of rain
lulling heavy eyes to sleep
rhythmic dancing drops


2 comments:

bittersweet said...

i remember listening to the rain and wondering if it's playing several familiar tunes at the same tune. your simple tanka reminded me of my love for rain.

Anonymous Poet said...

This piece has a nice rhythm. Like the rain you describe.