[senryu]
cemetry stroll:
even the squirrels
have each other
+ + +
taken too soon
God's timing— certainly
not my own
+ + +
last casualty:
the smell of your hair
forgotten
even the squirrels
have each other
+ + +
taken too soon
God's timing— certainly
not my own
+ + +
last casualty:
the smell of your hair
forgotten
for m.
Labels:
Poetry
6 comments:
enjoyed.
Kevin,
Thanks for sharing your sadness with your readers. My condolences for your loss. Your "last casualty" is haunting and beautiful.
Judy
thanks for your kindness Kami. the loss i write of here occured nearly fourteen years ago, when still in high school. i haven't given it 'voice' until just now.
kevin
I bury my face
in the luxuriant coat
of your memory
very poignant. thanks for stopping by, catnap!
kevin
thanks for your kind words. i certainly will return to read more of your prose, skee.
kevin
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