Monday, April 03, 2006


our lives, like lightning
bright, boundless, full of sound
and oh, so brief!


Danielle said...

You can't keep a good haiku down. Gorgeous.

bigshoulders said...

thanks, Danielle.

Bill said...

Alliteration and assonance controlled and expressive.

bigshoulders said...

Thank You, Bill. I wish I were more prolific, but I'll take what comes to me.