Wednesday, April 19, 2006

[senryu]

lunchroom:
cacophony of smells
and gossip

7 comments:

Lae said...

I certainly enjoyed this one - thanks

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

good one! Being a teacher, I see that all the time. :)

bigshoulders said...

Thanks, Lae and Andrew!
b.s.

Bill said...

I like "cacophony" here.

Anonymous Poet said...

Perfect. This reminds me of the school lunch room. It is exactly right.

bigshoulders said...

bill: i don't know the term for 'bending' meanings with words, but the only word i could think of to use was cacophony.

AP: thanks!

bittersweet said...

Mine was a canteen without walls, but everything else was the same. Ahh... *sniffsniff* :D