Wednesday, April 19, 2006

[senryu]

lunchroom:
cacophony of smells
and gossip

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7 comments:

  1. TammyWed Apr 19, 10:49:00 PM

    I certainly enjoyed this one - thanks

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  2. J. Andrew LockhartWed Apr 19, 11:03:00 PM

    good one! Being a teacher, I see that all the time. :)

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  3. bigshouldersThu Apr 20, 08:00:00 AM

    Thanks, Lae and Andrew!
    b.s.

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  4. BillSat Apr 22, 03:11:00 PM

    I like "cacophony" here.

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  5. Anonymous PoetThu Apr 27, 11:22:00 AM

    Perfect. This reminds me of the school lunch room. It is exactly right.

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  6. bigshouldersThu Apr 27, 12:48:00 PM

    bill: i don't know the term for 'bending' meanings with words, but the only word i could think of to use was cacophony.

    AP: thanks!

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  7. CherylFri Apr 28, 09:13:00 PM

    Mine was a canteen without walls, but everything else was the same. Ahh... *sniffsniff* :D

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