4/26/2006 12:10:00 PM
On it's on this would bring to mind a child genuinely afraid to go do school for some reason. The bigger bully comes to my mind immediately. - And it is a touching story.But considering the prior post - this takes on a whole new,and more profound meaning. Very well done.
thanks lae. i actually witnessed this happen when behind a stopped school bus one morning. i thought about it for several, several miles.thanks for stopping by! kevin
Well done.I've witnessed this scene several times as well. It stays in your mind, makes a pause in your thoughts - like a bus stop.
Awwww. . . . Sad. I can see this in my mind, perfectly. A wonderful haiku if there ever was one. Succinct, yet highly evocative.
thanks Natalia! it did stay with me. AP: thanks for the vote of confidence! that's the challenge of 'ku... thanks for stopping in!kevin
Aww. I'm sure the tears will be gone with the help of some newfound friends :)C
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