Friday, December 30, 2005

[senryu]

dotting the carpet,
shreds of Christmas wrappings
felines call them 'toys'

3 comments:

Judy Kamilhor said...

I like this one. It's a rare situation where everyone "wins," the people get their presents, and the cats get the rest to play with.

Also, I read the quotes you selected and was moved by the messages.

kami

bigshoulders said...

thanks, Kami. i want to be more prolific with my haiku but they only seem to want to come out single file. :) and sometimes after a few days 'gestation' as this one did.

kevin

CatsDish said...

Hi! I love your poem. I love kitties, too. That's why I've started up a new blog called "The Cat's Dish." There I feature a different cat each week sent in by readers. Would you like your cat to be featured?

http://coupledreview.weblogs.us/